Thank you for applying at The Bastion. Before we can accept you, there are a few points we need clarified.
- Roxas was in Vatheon for quite some time, so we would like a paragraph or two describing any changes to his personality that occurred during his time at Vatheon.
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Thank you for applying at The Bastion. Before we can accept you, there are a few points we need clarified.
- Roxas was in Vatheon for quite some time, so we would like a paragraph or two describing any changes to his personality that occurred during his time at Vatheon.
You have 72 hours to post your revisions. Please post them as a reply to this comment.
If you have any questions about the revision request, please feel free to contact us.