Thank you for applying at The Bastion. Before we can accept you, there are a few points we need clarified.
- The entry section of the app isn't meant to be a sample. It's a short description of how they arrived at the Bastion itself (either by finding their own way there or by being rescued by someone else), and anything of note that they encountered on the way. Please look at Nezumi's and Night's applications for examples of how the entry section should look.
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Thank you for applying at The Bastion. Before we can accept you, there are a few points we need clarified.
- The entry section of the app isn't meant to be a sample. It's a short description of how they arrived at the Bastion itself (either by finding their own way there or by being rescued by someone else), and anything of note that they encountered on the way. Please look at Nezumi's and Night's applications for examples of how the entry section should look.
You have 72 hours to post your revisions. Please post them as a reply to this comment.
If you have any questions about the revision request, please feel free to contact us.