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Date: 2013-04-27 05:42 am (UTC)Thank you for applying at The Bastion. Before we can accept you, there are a few points we need clarified.
-You did a good job of detailing his history, but we would like to hear more about his personality. Based on his actions in the game, what kind of person is he? You can either add more separate from his history, or mix in more of his personality with what you have so far.
You have 72 hours to post your revisions. Please post them as a reply to this comment.
If you have any questions about the revision request, please feel free to contact us.